The Introduction of a thesis outline is like the prelude to a piece of music. Here you present your research question to the reader. Experts have suggested some practical guidelines on how to frame research questions:
- Try to place your research question in the context of either a current “hot” area, or an older area that remains viable.
- Provide a brief but appropriate historical backdrop.
- Provide the contemporary context in which your proposed research question occupies the central stage.
- Identify “key players” and refer to the most relevant and representative publications.
Following the inverted pyramid style of presenting information, start the introduction with a general statement of the problem area, with a focus on a specific research problem, followed by the rationale or justification for the proposed study. In the website, scholarshipNet.info, Wong (n.d.) lists the following general elements of an Introduction:
- State the research problem, which is often referred to as the purpose of the study.
- Provide the context for your research question and justify why the study is needed or important.
- Present the rationale of your proposed study and clearly indicate why it is worth doing.
- Briefly describe the major issues to be addressed by your research.
- Set the boundaries of your proposed research in order to provide a clear focus.
Justify the research problem
Also referred to as the “rationale” , this is the part of the proposal in which you try to convince your adviser and research committee members why your proposed research needs to be done. You can do this by describing how the results may be used, such as, your research may:
- help design future communication campaigns
- develop better instructional modules in specific areas, say, HIV/AIDS prevention, smoking cessation, newborn screening, etc.
- influence government regulation on cigarette or alcohol advertising
- change the way farmers obtain information from extension technicians
- shape societal norms on environmental protection
Provide details on the above points to produce a convincing argument on the usefulness of the research. Are there other contributions your research will make? If so, describe them in detail.
Emphasize communication elements
In a communication thesis proposal, start with the communication elements of your research problem. This can sufficiently be covered by one or two paragraphs. Remember that you are a communication major and not a biological or physical sciences student so don’t start your Introduction with a treatise on the technical content of your thesis. For instance, in a study on “Fisherfolks’ information needs on mangrove conservation”, don’t write several paragraphs of the importance and results of research on mangroves.
Examine how the short introduction was written in a research proposal on the use of entertainment-education for rice pest management below:
Sample introduction
Title: Motivating farmers to reduce insecticide use through a radio drama series in Vietnam
Research has shown that a large proportion of rice farmers’ pesticide use can be reduced. Many of the chemicals used are hazardous to human health as well as detrimental to the environment and disrupting natural biological control mechanisms promoting secondary pests, like the brown planthopper. For instance, sprays in the first 40 days of the crop produced 56 million more pests and 14 million less predators per ha than the unsprayed fields.
Since farmers’ spray decisions are due more to loss aversion attitudes, biased beliefs and local peer pressures, mass media can be effective in modifying the cognitive heuristics in decision-making and practice change. The Entertainment-Education strategy to facilitate social change has been successfully used in India, Mexico, UK, Jamaica, Costa Rica and several African countries. EE can effectively be applied to cultivate a new societal norm with regard to pesticide use by communicating IPM principles. In addition it can potentially be extended to other issues, like health education (e.g. HIV/AIDS) and resource and environment management.

Communication campaign poster to scale up adoption of ecological engineering in rice production environments in San Men county, Zhejiang, China. Developed by Wei Chen and Zeng-Rong Zhu (Zhejiang University, Hangzhou, China)
These guidelines are relevant for both teachers and students in communication or social science research. As this is an initial list, please feel free to suggest other thesis outline review guidelines to help students in the throes of getting their outlines approved:
1. Check citations for conformity to the APA citation format.
- Where there are multiple authors, spell out et al. if multiple authors are up to 6 names.
- Accuracy of publication dates, authors and titles
2. Check Literature Cited — again for conformity to the APA formatting guide.
- Include only references mentioned in the text
- Spell out names of all authors
3. Verify the statements cited or copied against the original — check the links, use Google Scholar to download the original PDF used — this will ferret out the statements taken out of context.
4. Refer to the thesis title, objectives and conceptual framework in checking the operational definition of terms and methodology.
5. Check independent variables listed — it is important to focus on a few key variables that research has shown to impact on the dependent variables.
6. Check thoroughly the operational definition of terms to spot carelessly copied and pasted statements from previous terms.
7. Check the scales or research procedures to be used to measure the key variables to screen invalid measures.
8. Check for plagiarism – be suspicious when the Introduction, Review of Literature and Theoretical Framework are so smoothly written and yet the Methodology is full of grammatical errors. This should ring a bell to verify the citations to find plagiarized paragraphs and sentences. Require your students to read: Oops, I Plagiarized.
Suggestions from readers
1. From Dr. Fanny Kollin (CLSU)
Additional information about titling is wanting. Most teachers may not be aware of how many words there should be in a research title and how to state it. This has been a problem of editors like me as some titles may have 4-5 lines with more than 20 important words. While it may be the last to edit or revise, it is always best to be aware of this on the onset.
This article is based on the author’s BS Development Communication thesis.
Suggested citation:
Godoy, Jayson V. (2008). Improvement of at-risk elementary science pupils’ problem-solving skills in a media-assisted activity-based learning environment. Unpublished BS Development Communication thesis, Visayas State University, Baybay, Leyte, Philippines
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Jayson V. Godoy
BS Development Communication 2008
Visayas State University
Visca, Baybay, Leyte, Philippines
The move to improve student learning emphasizes the need for the use of educational technology. The reason for this is that educational technologies like multimedia and instructional video help improve the quality of learning outcomes. As Wheeler (2001) stressed, the use of technology enhances children’s learning experiences, helps them to think, communicate creatively, work collaboratively, and helps them prepare for successful lives and careers in an increasingly technological work. Wang and Woo (2007) also said that learning technologies increase learners’ motivation, link them to various information resources, support collaborative learning, and allow teachers more time for facilitation activities.
For technologies, however, to support learning, current literature (i.e., Bransford, Brown, & Cocking, 2000; Cognition and Technology Group at Vanderbilt [CTGV], 1997) suggests that the use of educational technology be integrated into a learning environment where students actively construct their own meanings. This means that instead of serving as transmitter of information, technology should serve the roles as context to support learning by doing, vehicles for exploring knowledge to support learning by constructing, intellectual partners to support learning by reflecting, and as social medium to support learning through conversation and interaction (Jonassen, Peck, & Wilson, 1999). In this way, technology no longer becomes a “full” system (Zucchermaglio, 1994) that treats students as empty receptacles into which information is poured, but becomes a tool that can lead students to experience the knowledge construction process (Edelson, Pea, & Gomez, 1996).
As it girds towards global competitiveness, the Philippines is exerting efforts to equip its young generation, especially the students, with skills in science and mathematics. However, these efforts appear to be falling short of their expectations. For instance, Nebres (2007) reported of examination results showing that Filipino students perform dismally in national and international tests in science and mathematics. More specifically, Nebres showed that many schools in the country obtained a mean percentage score of less than 50 in the National Achievement Test (NAT) and that the Philippines ranks 36th of the 39 countries in the Trends in Mathematics and Science Studies.
This poor performance is so pervasive in Leyte. According to Dr. Eduardo de Veyra, Science Division Supervisor of Region 8, the mean percentage score of Leyte Grade 6 pupils in the NAT for 2005-2006 was below 50%.
The low achievement of Filipino students is confounded by the fact that many of them belong to the at-risk group. According to reports, while they may not possess learning disabilities, these pupils come from low socio-economic families and often display characteristics such as poor school attendance and anti-social behavior (Swanson, 1991).
This article is based on the author’s BS Development Communication thesis.
Suggested citation:
Alviola, Ulderico B. (2007). Appropriation of the information and communications technologies (ICTS) by farmers and extension workers in Borongan, Eastern Samar Unpublished BS Development Communication thesis, Visayas State University, Baybay, Leyte, Philippines
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Ulderico B. Alviola
BS Development Communication 2007
Visayas State University
Visca, Baybay, Leyte, Philippines
Considering its value in poverty alleviation (Alampay, Heeks & Soliva, 2003), information has proven itself to be an asset for development. Being so valuable, the nation’s economies are now rolled into a dichotomy of classes—the information rich and the information poor. This dichotomy of classes is incessantly aggravated by a global gap that is shared among rich and poor countries and also between wealthy and underprivileged individuals. This gap is termed as the digital divide (De Munster, 2004).
In an attempt to bridge the digital divide and erase the fear of exacerbating the already existing economic gap between technological “have’s” and “have not’s”, various information and communications technology (ICT) for development projects were launched. These projects were aimed at reaching the information-poor regions of the world. ICT tools (referring to new media and gadgets like computers and cellular phones, among others) were integrated into the fields like agriculture, education, health, social justice and commerce, among others to make them usable especially for the people living in developing countries (ICT for Development, 2003).
In the Philippines, ICT is now being used by the government as a strategy to advance agricultural extension and communication programs. The potentials of technologies in information dissemination are being utilized to bring relevant information to every farmer. One example of a program which tries to use ICTs for development is the Techno Gabay (Technology Guide) Program (TGP). As one of the banner programs of the Philippine Council for Agriculture, Forestry and Natural Resources Research and Development (PCARRD), the TGP is designed to bring science-based information and technology services to the end users in agriculture, forestry and natural resources sectors. In Eastern Visayas, it is implemented through the Visayas Consortium for Agriculture and Resources Program, which is based at the Visayas State University (VSU) in Baybay City, Leyte.
ICT is one of the four component modalities of TGP. This project component facilitates storage, retrieval and exchange of information through computers and cellular phones to provide immediate response to current problems and frequently asked questions of farmers. It provides opportunities for capability enhancement through ICT trainings and Internet link offering unlimited chance to participate in e-commerce through quick information access (PCARRD, 2006).
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